The Ghost
“Bonnie I need you to scare the life out of Miss Hibbert’s! For this trick to work you need to tell her about a ghost who haunted St Clare’s. ” said Ashley.
“Knock, Knock” “Yes darling?” said Miss Hibbert in her calm but cold voice. “Well...I had been up for about 2 hours and suddenly as the flame flickered and then went out I saw a ghost. It was suddenly a coincidence. You see, once, there was a girl was so upset she ran away with a lantern in her hand. The wind blew the lantern out. And suddenly she fell off a cliff to her death.
What a dramatic and sudden ending! I like the way you described how Miss Hibbert was talking..'calm, but cold voice.' Remember, each time someone new speaks, start a new line. Keep up the great descriptions. :)
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