Mr and Mrs Johnson have a very successful daughter called
April. She got an A+ on her Musical Studies and also got a scholarship to Harvard. Her parents were so proud of her they took her on a trip to Hawaii.They were at the Airport, on the YELLOW AIRPLANE and were heading off to Hawaii. They had EATEN their Breakfast because their flight was at 7:30am.
April had brought her VIOLIN on the trip since she loved playing it in front of crowds of people. The AIRPLANE was taking off. It SWEPT off the ground and the family was on their way to Hawaii! Everyone was excited!
Brilliant 100 word challenge. I bet you would like a trip to Hawaii for getting an A+. I liked the layout of your story.
ReplyDeleteYou have harnessed your imagination well to take a group of random words and amalgamate them into a coherent story. I like how you describe the aeroplane as 'sweeping off the ground.' I look forward to even more interesting adjectives in your next 100 word challenge.
ReplyDeleteI love this story Bella!
ReplyDeleteIt was laid out very well and the way that you added the word swept was brilliant but works amazingly!
Love, love, love it!!! :)
Nikita
Rimu class
YMS
Thank you for your comment Nikita!
DeleteI really appreciate it!
Bella N
Rimu Class
Yaldhurst
Hi Bella,
ReplyDeleteI love your story,it was really interesting!
Is your story a exactly 100 words?
Emily
Rimu
YMS