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Tuesday, June 28, 2016

The Escape!

This week for the 100 Word Challenge we had to write a story about Alcatraz and what it must have been like to be in there. I really enjoyed this challenge! Please comment on it!

Aaarghhh! Please don’t do this I have got kids and a husband! Please just take all my money.
‘BOOM’! Put your hands in the air now! 
Do it!
You can’t do this to me! I didn’t mean to hurt anyone I just needed the money!
Well you can cry that into your pillow, wait I forgot you’re going to jail! Nevermind!


I will escape! And when I do I will kill all of you! 
It was night time and all the guard were asleep. Perfect! Snap went the bars. Yes, finally! Life in the Alcatraz was torture. 

I am free! Or so I thought?
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  1. UnknownJune 29, 2016 at 9:44 AM

    How dramatic! I like how you left some suspense at the end as to what else might occur. One day I will take you to Alcatraz so you can see for yourself what it must have been like to have to be there.

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  2. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 10:22 AM

    very good story.I would hate to live in prison.Ps nice twist

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