What a great set of poems, I really enjoyed the poem about the Smokey because it really painted a good picture of your cat in my head and made me think of visits to the vet with my cat, Bilbo. Some of the text was quite hard to read as background made it difficult to see. Have you been to Paris?
Kia Ora, I adored your google slide presentation, I loved the poem called Dead Life Cat, your rhyming was amazing, it was really a true poem. Some of your words were really hard to read, because of that font that you used, you can also go back into your blog post and easily change that font that you used. By the way who is smokey, is it your cat?
Hi, I really enjoyed your poem because you chose a good use of imagery. You chose your background images well, but maybe next time put a voice over on so students who aren’t as matured in literacy can understand. Would you think about having a sequel and turning one of your poems into a full story? My favourite poems are mostly from shakespeare. Thank you -Naomi
Kia ora, I am Isaac, I like your poem and I like what you you wrote about. I want to know what type of Poem it is?. I think you should make each slide longer but that is up to you I love your poem.
Hello Bella, I loved your poem, it was really personal, I loved that it was your opinion about the things that were chosen. You are really creative. I loved the topics chosen because you must of had to put a lot of thought into what makes them so special. I can tell you have really worked hard. I noticed that you had written about Paris - have you ever wanted to visit Paris?
Bella: My favourite genre of writing is poetry. As a reader I can make a lot of connections with your Haiku poem, it makes me think about being still, in amongst all the noise. Your image and poem help to create a clear image for your reader. They compliment each other nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Hi, I’m Jade, a student from South Hornby School. I think the poem was really cool because there were tons of descriptive words. I think it would help if you did a few more sentences. I think you should do more poems, it would add more value to your work.
What a great set of poems, I really enjoyed the poem about the Smokey because it really painted a good picture of your cat in my head and made me think of visits to the vet with my cat, Bilbo. Some of the text was quite hard to read as background made it difficult to see. Have you been to Paris?
ReplyDeletethnx 4 the feedback and no i haven't been to paris
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora, I adored your google slide presentation, I loved the poem called Dead Life Cat, your rhyming was amazing, it was really a true poem. Some of your words were really hard to read, because of that font that you used, you can also go back into your blog post and easily change that font that you used. By the way who is smokey, is it your cat?
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ReplyDeleteHi, I really enjoyed your poem because you chose a good use of imagery. You chose your background images well, but maybe next time put a voice over on so students who aren’t as matured in literacy can understand. Would you think about having a sequel and turning one of your poems into a full story? My favourite poems are mostly from shakespeare. Thank you -Naomi
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DeleteKia ora, I am Isaac, I like your poem and I like what you you wrote about. I want to know what type of Poem it is?. I think you should make each slide longer but that is up to you I love your poem.
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DeleteHello Bella, I loved your poem, it was really personal, I loved that it was your opinion about the things that were chosen. You are really creative. I loved the topics chosen because you must of had to put a lot of thought into what makes them so special. I can tell you have really worked hard. I noticed that you had written about Paris - have you ever wanted to visit Paris?
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DeleteBella: My favourite genre of writing is poetry. As a reader I can make a lot of connections with your Haiku poem, it makes me think about being still, in amongst all the noise. Your image and poem help to create a clear image for your reader. They compliment each other nicely. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi, I’m Jade, a student from South Hornby School. I think the poem was really cool because there were tons of descriptive words. I think it would help if you did a few more sentences. I think you should do more poems, it would add more value to your work.
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